求英语高手帮忙把以下文章翻译成英文！不要机翻的，谢谢！
Five, at the beginning of the research results of the 1 experiments involved in area 1) has 16 classes in grade 2010 in the large-scale use of online scoring system for a semester, to test up to 470 the number of people. At the end of the semester received 470 questionnaires. 2) the project in the 2011 English professional two administrative class (80 people) and 2012 level 6 administrative class (320 people) applicable. 2 the initial research results of L in 2012 July received 470 copies of questionnaires. The students on the system view is: 1) 96.3% of the students think that online essay scoring system is relatively large or great help for themselves; 2) is almost all students (99.1%) said to the students around the recommend the use of the system. 3) 100% of the students said they would use the system to improve English writing in the future under the condition of no teacher. 4) 98.9% of the students think the online scoring system and traditional teacher evaluation combined with the effect will be better; the rest of the individual students think traditional correction is more suitable for their own. 5) 98.3% (462) of the students think that the system is real to reflect their English level; 6) 97.2% (457) of the students said that every time carefully read the writing comments, that reviews more correctly, and the rest of the students even read reviews, but it is not clear what the comments are not accurate. L due to the initial system with score, the students put forward some suggestions for the revision of system function: 1) increase the corresponding example analysis and the beautiful words; 2) there are lots of fuzzy information in whispers warnings, the main reason is the imperfect corpus information. Want to be able to combine the network increase corpus information, improve the score of quality; 3) offer online consulting function or a combination of traditional essay scoring, get more accurate feedback information; 4) the scoring system focuses on the spelling in word sentence opinions, but in terms of content and structure of the lack of specific comments or opinions; 5) hope given the template sentence; 6) in the changing composition only the last submission, hope to be able to retain every change information, to focus on their own improvement; 7) to provide more synonyms or replace the word usage information; 8) advice and tips provide syntactic change more; 9) provide the sharing function among the students, the good sentences or the selected shared; 10) increase the students in discussions between function, for some personal problems can in this platform ang and other students and teachers to discuss and share; 11) added to allow reading other classmates composition function; 12) increase the voice or video function on the platform; 13) prompt composition for excellent pointed out. At the same time, increase the confidence; 14) reviews some stereotyped, Should be more personalized; 15) changes in the composition according to the prompt, sometimes writing score will be lower than the previous scores; conclusion: This is a preliminary study on a semester of large-scale use of scoring system. From the data show the students on the online system by curiosity to the actual operation, most of the students take the positive attitude of acceptance, and with a high evaluation, consider the system has obvious improvement of your own writing level, especially can get timely information feedback in the absence of tutoring case. At the same time for teachers, largely reducing the burden of the teachers; reform of the new teaching mode, can at any time to monitor the composition between individual students, in order to effectively formulate and adjust the teaching mode and content. Which laid a solid foundation for the next stage of research.
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美国移民排期表什么叫进和退？怎么看？
进和退是指移民排期表中针对某个国家或地区的排期是否变化或更新。进表示当前该国家或地区的排期正在缩短，即移民申请的等待时间正在减少，退则表示排期正在加长，等待时间正在延长。在美国移民排期表中，可以通过比较两个日期之间特定国家或地区的排期来确定其进退情况。如果两个日期之间的排期变短，表示进；如果变长，表示退。同时，还可以关注该国家或地区的优先日期是否向前推进或向后推迟，来进一步确定排期的进退情况。
麻烦大家帮我把下面的文章翻译成英文，不要机器翻的，谢谢，好的我还会加分的
Dear Mary,
Hope everything is fine for you. 希望你一切都好（客套）。I'm new here,and my name is Camp.我是新来的，我叫camp。 It's my honour to be your neighbour. 很荣幸成为你的邻居。 I'm 20 and still in college. 我20岁，还在求学。I moved here with my parents so I can be some nearer to the university. 我和父母一起搬来这，那样我就能离学校近一点了。I love sports and do exercise everyday, as playing basketball and running. 我喜欢运动，每天锻炼，比如打篮球和跑步。I love the surroundings. 我喜欢这儿的环境。 It's clean and fit for sports. 很干净，而且适合运动。 I hope my friends can enjoy my new house and join my happiness too. 我希望我的朋友也能看看我的新家，分享我的快乐。So I'm going to make a moving party on this weekend. 所以我打算在本周末开一个搬家派对。Would you like to join us? 你愿意来参加吗？Then I may introduce my friends to you, all happy young men. 那样，我就可以把我的朋友们介绍给你，全是快乐的年轻人。And else, I won't bother you if you are a part of the party, right? 另外，如果你是派对的一份子，我就不会打扰到你了，对吧？Pls reply. 请回复。And if you would like to come, the honour should be mine. 如果你愿意来，那将是我的荣幸。
Sincerely，真诚的
Camp
中国公民要去美国旅游需要具备哪些条件,过程是怎么的申请的?
办理美国签证没有说您必须要具备哪些条件的。签证官主要对申请者4个方面做全面考察，首先是否去过和美国同等发达国家，例如是否去过欧洲或者澳洲；其次是否有完美的家庭，例如结婚生孩子了。第三是否有很好的经济条件，例如有房有车，最后一点就是看您是否有稳定的工作，这四个方面各占25分，满分100，及格60分，只有各方面都比较好总分数才会高，才有可能达到及格线。其实签证通过与否，主要看我们是否能让签证官相信我们去美国以后一定会回来，如果签证官相信我们去美国后一定会回来，他就会给我们签证！
national-visa-center是什么意思
national-visa-center，国家签证中心；
national
[英][ˈnæʃnəl][美][ˈnæʃənəl, ˈnæʃnəl]
adj.
国家的; 国有的; 国民的; 民族主义的;
n.
[常用复数]全国性比赛; 某国国民; 全国性报刊; （机构等的）全国总部;
复数：nationals
相关单词：National
visa
[英][ˈvi:zə][美]['vi:zə]
n.
签证;
vt.
签发签证;
第三人称单数：visas
复数：visas
现在进行时：visaing
过去式：visaed
过去分词：visaed
相关单词：VisaVISA
